Lets be real here, going to college is one of the most worry filled times any of us will ever know or experience. This transitional phase from high school has characteristics that are obviously coupled with this anxiety. Leaving what you call home, all of your friends, gaining new responsibilities, harder school work, and learning to manage time are all good examples of this. Lurking under these seemingly obvious obstacles that go along with heading off to a new world is something that is causing more problems than ever before not only for students, but for faculty, and college surrounding communities alike. The amount of college students binge drinking has been rising steadily since the 1970’s, and has recently spiked reaching new heights and causing a gaggle of new problems for everyone involved. The word Binge may sound blunt and nasty, but in all actuality it is only fitting. Binge drinking is accomplished very easily in fact, four drinks for a female and five for a male by definition is all it takes to be a binge drinker.
Those hit hardest by this pandemic of extreme consumption (illegally might I add) of alcoholic beverages is the student body. Today’s youth is being crippled, and burnt from both ends. Students all over the country are not only losing their perfect grade point averages because of their seemingly unwise choices, they’re criminal record and integrity are also ate stake. College freshmen Chris Van House dually noted “ first semester was bad…SO BAD.” What he was referring to was the ridiculously large amount of alcohol consumption that ensued at the notorious Minnesota party school Mankato state. “ it was a pleasant change when money supplies ran out on campus, and funding of the daily party scene diminished.” Chris went on to tell me about his experiences on campus that semester. As a result to his consumption Chris ended his first stretch of classes having dropped or failed 5 of them, and with his first minor under his belt. He was one of an astounding 127 that received minor consumption’s that evening just before the end of the first block. Department of Public Safety Commander Matt DuRose stated “I hope the bust will set the tone for the next semester, namely that my department will have a zero tolerance approach.”
Mankato is one of the more well known “party” schools in the mid-west, and alcohol consumption in the 2009 year has gone up substantially. However, their grades and innocence were not the only things on the line at this college. MNSU Mankato is also highly recognized as one of the most STI ridden colleges in the country, having large outbreaks of anything from herpes to syphilis. These diseases have been spread throughout campus time and time again from the sharing of multiple sexual partners. Said sharing of many partners is attributed to underage drinking, and binge drinking at parties on a large scale. Inhibitions
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1. What are some areas that could use more detail? Why?
ReplyDeleteProposed solutions to the "binge drinking epidemic" maybe.
2. What additional sources might the author use? Does the lead involve you in the story?
The lead does involve you because it is very honest. Sam could use other students, police officers, college staff, and other experts on the subject as additional sources.
3. Do the first 450 words contain a well defined scene (a detailed description of someone doing something or something happening)? What is it? If not, make a suggestion for a scene that might work.
Not really - you could describe the scene of Chris and the 126 other students who got minors that one night.
4. What questions would you like answered in the next 300 words? What would you like to see or hear more of? Less of? Include, any other suggestions you have for improvement.
Maybe the reason why students are binge drinking so much.